I have been busy writing. I wish there was a way to make that sound thrilling.
Hmm.
Keyboard in hand, I have been fighting …
That sounds violent. I’m not a violent person.
Hmm.
My fingers are nearly worn to the bone…
Nope. That sounds like my mother.
How about:
My brain is asploding from the words!
Too hipster. (P.S. I’m wearing black jeans.)
I stared out the window for a really long time. I think I saw a tree grow.
Actually, I have been writing. That’s all I’ve got.
Tags: Revising, The Next Historical