So …. what do you think of this?
An extremely powerful demon. A no-strings-attached witch. Is their business really just pleasure?
Kynan Aijan’s centuries-long enslavement to a mage left him borderline insane, and he holds all witches responsible. His encounter with Maddy Winters is supposed to end with him killing her in horrible ways but instead ends with magical bonds he must swear will never be completed. As he regains his sanity, he accepts that Winters will never forgive him.
No ordinary witch, Maddy Winters isn’t big on relationships. The fight against evil magic users always takes top priority. But her bonds to Kynan give her intimate access to his thoughts and experiences, and soon her instance that she has no feelings for him becomes a deception she can’t afford to give up.
As Kynan and Maddy join forces to stop a rebellious and murderous witch, they can’t help but feel the pull of the dark magic that binds them. Will their fight for what’s right lead to a fight for each other?
My Demon Warlord is the seventh installment in the My Immortals saga, a series of paranormal romance novels. If you like magical supernatural tales, explosive chemistry, and sensual sexual encounters, then you’ll love Carolyn Jewel’s latest breathtaking romance.
I like it!
In the first line, I might want to change the “no-strings-attached” modifier. I feel like that has to do more with a situation than a person. Commitment-phobic doesn’t seem like the right modifier either, but maybe something in that direction?
Can’t wait to read this!
“But her bonds to Kynan give her intimate access to his thoughts and experiences, and soon her instance that she has no feelings for him becomes a deception she can’t afford to give up.”
I suspect “instance” in the above sentence should be “insistence”?
I’m looking forward to this, though!
I’m sooo excited to read this! Can’t wait~
*Makes grabby hands*
I’ve been thinking about this blurb since you posted it.
First, I want to say there are *no words* that can express how I excited I am about this release! O_O SO excited!
Re: the blurb. Since you did ask for opinions, I want to say that the blurb is really nice but I don’t think it conveys the tension that has been building between Maddy and Kynan.
MrsJoseph:
Thank you so much! I’ve been tweaking the language this I posted this, but I think you’re absolutely right. I’m going to work on it some more because that point needs to be a focus.
Much appreciated.